Sunday, May 20, 2007

First Professional Feedback

''Yeeeek!''

I run downstairs to scream at Nicholas.

''News! News! A very small bit of news!''

Nicholas does his customary wide-eyed expression.

''Remember that article I was writing? Where you suggested I write about the grass-ski resort? Well, it turned into writing about the Vietnamese community in Seattle! Which was mostly about food!''

Nicholas maintains the goggle-eyes.

''The editor called me back! I mean, she texted me! She wants me to pitch more stuff!''

I whip out my phone to quote the text message.

''Er, actually, it's ''liked yr copy. Good writing. Keep a pitching.'' ''